You wont believe me.... I have another discovery to share!!!!! Some archeologist found 2 new fossils of early humans in Africa. A 3 000 000 years old female adult and and a 3 000 000 years old male child. Those fossils made us discover new things about Australopithecus sediba ( what they were) : They have long thumbs, they had a brain that looked very much like ours but one quarter smaller, we also discovered that they were able to climb trees and walk on 2 foot, finally they say that their is a possibility that they were already making and using tools!!! One of the most incredible things about this discovery is that they found a sample of fossilized skin, this sample is now in laboratory to be checked. But all of those new ideas and discoveries make people disagree and argue!!! Like Harvard, George Washington University and many others. What do YOU think?
I really like your writing style, it is very easy to read and you have good voice. However, in this assignment, you need to write a summary, it is more of a non-fiction type of writing. Then, in the reflective paragraph, this is where you can write your thoughts, opinions, and analysis of the article's information.
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